trying to get a Daily Deviation for this piece. please critique and let me know if you think i have a chance!
i love roses. not in any stereotypical kinda of way; i just love how each petal blooms perfectly, complimenting those around them like a gentle dance. their smell is calming, the touch of their soft, cool petals are soothing, and the colours, all the beautiful colours of roses...are truly uplifting.
this photo is of one of three roses my airman gave me for my seventeen birthday (three years ago): one white, one red, and one a whitish-green colour all tied up in a beautiful ribbon. in the years that followed whenever someone asked me what i wanted for my birthday i told them nothing. nothing. because all i wanted was another rose from him.
Make or BreakTo dream is to be happyMake or Break by ~BR0KEN-TYP3-WRIT3R
To dream is to be free
A blissful moment in time to forget
All the problems around me
Wishing for a better life
Hoping for something more
Hey! Its me again!
Guess what I've got in store!
Oh god, please go away
Why don't you disrupt my thoughts in yesterday?
Let me sleep in peace
All me to stir not once
For you have intruded my thoughts everyday this month
That's my job, darling dear
To make your problems bigger than you could ever fear
I like making you crazy
I like making you sick
Your multiple personality moments are far better than slapstick
I see what you're doing
I know your game
But your time
Tug of WarTug of War by ~BR0KEN-TYP3-WRIT3R
Positives, positives what to say
I have pretty porcelain skin
That shines as bright as day
My eyes are a mix of grey, green, gold, and brown
A prism of colour all the way around
My hair is the colour of fire
That glows with bright red flames
My dimples are-
Hey! What's your game?
Lets not forget you filthy whore
You've slept with at least a dozen men
And you're bigger than a store
Your stomach and thighs are nothing but fat
Who the hell would wanna get near that?
Covered from head to toe in scars and burns
Face it, you're nothing but a-
Excuse me, let me finish
As I was saying
My dimples are faint and cute