trying to get a Daily Deviation for this piece. please critique and let me know if you think i have a chance!
i love roses. not in any stereotypical kinda of way; i just love how each petal blooms perfectly, complimenting those around them like a gentle dance. their smell is calming, the touch of their soft, cool petals are soothing, and the colours, all the beautiful colours of roses...are truly uplifting.
this photo is of one of three roses my airman gave me for my seventeen birthday (three years ago): one white, one red, and one a whitish-green colour all tied up in a beautiful ribbon. in the years that followed whenever someone asked me what i wanted for my birthday i told them nothing. nothing. because all i wanted was another rose from him.
Make or BreakTo dream is to be happyMake or Break by BR0KEN-TYP3-WRIT3R
To dream is to be free
A blissful moment in time to forget
All the problems around me
Wishing for a better life
Hoping for something more
Hey! Its me again!
Guess what I've got in store!
Oh god, please go away
Why don't you disrupt my thoughts in yesterday?
Let me sleep in peace
All me to stir not once
For you have intruded my thoughts everyday this month
That's my job, darling dear
To make your problems bigger than you could ever fear
I like making you crazy
I like making you sick
Your multiple personality moments are far better than slapstick
I see what you're doing
I know your game
But your time here is done
Now its my turn to reign
Psh! Not hardly
You'll fuck everything up
The last time we did this dance
You fell straight into your teacup
Burned by words made of hate and fear
Give up now
You'll be single by the end of this year
Strong words coming from someone soaked in sleaze
I'll have you know I've still got a few more tricks up my sleeve
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